Tuesday, December 16, 2008

More Of Princess Story!

Here's some more of the princess story! Please tell me if we need to add anything in it, or change anything in it! Thanks!

Bell sighed and thought, good. Then she thought what her mother was meaning to tell her.

"You know darling, we did invite your friends the other princesses for tomorrow morning. And i thought you could cancel your visit with the shepard boy."

"Oh!" gasped Bell, she had not thought of that, "well...maybe you could let me tell him? It won't be long, I promise!"

"Ummm...okay." answered her mother, and with that Bell dashed outside, telling her mother she would be right back. And she actaully was, because all she had to say was: "I have to cancel my visit with you tomorrow morning because I just can't make it that time." and then he said it was absoloutly fine and she smiled and ran back.

"Well, that was quick." her mother said when she was back.

"Yes, well, he didn't have much to say and kneither did I."

"Aaahhh." and that was the end of their conversation, for they were silent the rest of the tea time. And soon her mother ordered the maid to take a away their dishes.

"Yes, ma'am." the maid said.

Soon Bell got up from the large elegant table.
"Well, those cookies and tea were quite good." she said.

"Yes, they were." her mother agreed. Then Bell went to her room to change her pretty dress, because it was quite dirty now, going outside a lot and all.
When she came back down she had a pretty blue silk dress on, with a neckolace that matched it.
Then she started to sew a quilt for the winter, for they needed at least one extra blanket in the house. She absolotly loved to sew and did it all the time, and her mother loved it because it wasn't an outdoor thing to do for her daughter.

When she stopped sewing she decided she would grab some food and sneak outside to give it to the poor people.
Careful not to make any noise, she tip toed to the door. She would also have to be very careful not to make herself all dirty, for her mother would be very mad when she came back.

The poor people were very polite to bell. Then Bell thought, no wonder they were very kind anbd polite to me, I'm a princess!

When she stepped foot back into the palace, she realized that she managed to not get dirty! She was very suprised and releaved. And, better yet, her mother didn't notice her open the door. So Bell was then releaved. Bell started to read a book, because there was nothing else to do. But if her father were there, she would have done many fun things with him, and he would convince her mother to let her go outside whenever she wanted.

Bell thought her mother would be happy her father wasn't there to do that. And she was. Bell was, of course, not glad of that.

Bell felt like crying again, and she couldn't read while crying, so she put down the book.

"Oh, my dear princess, you don't have to cry all the time for your father, your fifteen now." her mother said, sitting down next to her.

"I know, but I just can't help it." Bell said, wiping her tears. Then her mother wrapped an arm around her and sighed.

It was the year 1867 in the winter, and Bell became very cold even in the palace. So she went up to her room to find a warm shawl.
When she finally got it on, she felt very warm, but not as warm as her father's hugs.

"'Tis cold, isn't it, Bell?" mother said.

2 comments:

helene said...

Oh wow, how great! <3<3<3

Kateri said...

Love it, Emily!!!! <3