Ok, this is CRAZY!!!!!!!!

I'm rewriting Elderin!!!!!!!! I know, I know, this is the millionth time!!!!! But it's just not right. I've been talking about it a lot with Thomas and he really wants to change the plot. I do too! This is the first part, and then comes two other parts, about two siblings, but you'll know about them later. Now it's about Hoenir, and it's going to be different. I know, it's CRAZY!!!!! But it's going to be cool.